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Rejection

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 by Bethany Maines

One of my manuscript was recently rejected.  And you
can guess how I feel about that. Not good. 

I think the harshest part was that the editor took the time
to reject it personally.  When you get a form letter, you can pretend that
no one really read it and that your genius will go undiscovered another day. When
they take the time to tell you why they hate your book-child and why it’s
deformed and hideous then it feels a little personal.  I admit that the
individual may not have used those EXACT words.  But that’s what it feels
like.  

But the problem with writing is that if you want to have your work read by
other human beings then first it has to… be read by other human beings. 
And those jackasses keep having opinions! The nerve! The unmitigated
gall! 

The other problem with this particular work is that I’ve
also written it to be a script.  I
believe the idea is imminently wonderful and would be a great TV show.  However, TV and Publishing have two wildly
different esthetics.  The notes I’ve
received on the script were that it should be funnier.  The book notes said there was too much
banter.  Or in other words… too
funny. 

Here’s the idea.

Vampire Heist (based on A Bite of Paris): When the vampire Nicholas de Cervon discovers that his
former home is now a museum he reunites the old horde to pull off the heist of
his after-life and get revenge on the Igor who betrayed him.

I don’t know what to tell you.  I like banter.  Will I be taking another editorial pass at it
to see if I can make my characters express the dreaded ennui and tragedy that
makes up the drudgery of life (places hand dramatically on brow)… yes, I
probably will.  Will I add a pratfall to
the script… maybe.

Meanwhile, today is #screenpit over on Twitter. If you like
my vampire idea and agree that it should be a TV show, head on over and give me
a retweet today.  https://twitter.com/BethanyMaines

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Bethany Maines is the award-winning author of the Carrie Mae Mysteries, San Juan Islands Mysteries, Shark Santoyo Crime Series, and numerous
short stories. When she’s not traveling to exotic lands, or kicking some
serious butt with her black belt in karate, she can be found chasing her
daughter or glued to the computer working on her next novel. You can also catch up with her on Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, and BookBub.

It’s Fra-Gee-Lay!

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by Bethany Maines
In the Christmas classic, A Christmas Story, the father wins a “major award” which turns out
to be a leg lamp that arrives in a large box marked “fragile.” His love for the
major award is only matched by his wife’s hatred for the fishnet clad leg and
the battle between the two has never stopped being funny.
This week, I was reminded of the leg lamp when I won my own
“major award.” I recently converted my story Blue Christmas to a screenplay and
submitted it to some screenplay contests that provided feedback to all
entries.  As a first time screenplay
writer, it was the feedback that I was pursuing.  In novel writing, it’s hard to find a beta
reader that can help identify problems. 
Most readers are not analytical and are really just there to enjoy the
book (and that is just fine and there’s no reason to change!), but to advance a
project it sometimes requires someone be more critical.  I’ve been fortunate to find a handful of good
beta readers for my novels, but when it came to a screenplay I was at a loss!
So I was excited to get feedback from genuine screenplay professionals.
The first contest said my script was “VERY close” and
provided some valuable insights.  And
this week I received notice from the second contest that I had been selected as
a winner! The only way I could be prouder is if it came with a leg lamp.
Winners have their screenplay’s opening scenes read by professional actors in a
“table reading.” Which is pretty much what it sounds like – actors at a table
doing a reading of the script.  The table
reading is filmed and posted on the contest site, so obviously I will linking
that here when the video goes live.  I
can’t wait to see actors saying words that I’ve written!  And I’m excited to continue my adventures in
scriptwriting.

And case you want a sneak peak at this action-packed romantic comedy before it hits big screens (I wish!)…

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High-rise burglary to pay for her grandmother’s cancer treatments might not be ideal, but Blue Jones is determined to do what it takes to get her grandmother the best care possible. She just didn’t plan on being tackled by gorgeous Jake Garner. Jake, drunk and recently dumped, mistakes Blue for the dog sitter and begins shoving his ex’s belongings at her including her French Bulldog—Jacques. But soon Jake is being pressured to return the dog and Blue is being targeted by mysterious attackers. Can Jake and Blue stop these mystery men without also getting Blue arrested for theft? For Blue, Christmas has never been quite so dangerous. For Jake, Christmas has never been quite so Blue.

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Bethany Maines is the author of the Carrie Mae Mystery Series, San Juan Islands Mysteries, Shark Santoyo Crime Series, and numerous short stories. When she’s not traveling to exotic lands, or kicking some serious butt with her fifth degree black belt in karate, she can be found chasing her daughter or glued to the computer working on her next novel. You can also catch up with her on YouTube, Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, and BookBub.